Oh evil family... evil...

Poor girl... Anya...kept making me think go Enya the singer. Oh well. Evil society too. evil... ok I better stop with my evil's'...muhahahaha (ok I am tired as you can see pretty much)

How could parents not sad for their child's death no matter how naughty she is... ? Something I probably will never understand.

Hm... positive or negitive? Positive first. You know that's how I roll... so the story was BRILLANT. I love the details that make you feel like you know nothing but everything at the same time. Great descriptions. Ok... yes, there's a negitive, but I think it doesn't really count since you were going for this. It's short. It's true short stories can be written in a page and a half. But this wasn't a story. It was a scene. And personally, me being OCD that bothers me. But ignore all that "negitive" stuff I said. It really is good!

YAY! I GOT MENTIONED AGAIN!
In one place you wrote 'bit' instead of 'but' other than that, very good, emotional . . . i like
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