 Saeril 2008-07-29 . chapter 1Wow... I love the imagery(soundery?) in this. I can practically hear the music. The musical terms are brilliant, especially "the faintest hint of a pianissimo," and I like the way it mirrors a piece of music- starting softly, a crescendo in the middle, and ending soflty. Good job! |
 Wonka's Scarlett Lollies 2008-07-29 . chapter 1I love this. I don't think I've ever read a poem that incorporates music themes, and since I play two instruments and am working on a third, this makes me happy. ^^ Anyway, this is one of the best poems I've read. Amazing. |