|Reviews for Leap Year|
| Burning Frost 8/2/08 . chapter 3
So far it's quite good, however you could place a little more excitement, after all this is the third chapter of the story, and very little in the way of "action" has occurred. I do have to compliment you on your main character's development, she could use a little more detail, and developing her in strenuous situations is probably the best way to do so. Please keep writing, I'd like to see how you continue this story.
P.S.- To get more reviews you need to give them. A whole lot of them.