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Literate Barbarian 2008-08-03 . chapter 1
This shows a lot of potential to get interesting. Your prose is easy to read and shows few obvious flaws.

The first paragraph seemed awkward and made it a bit harder to get into. You might want to break it down a bit so it flows into the rest more easily. Also, watch out for abrupt POV changes in the middle of a scene. This: "It was Quaker's immediate impression that this Anna was everything wrong with this new generation" felt really intrusive when we seem to be in Anna's head for the rest of the scene. You also may want to do something to designate thoughts, such as italics.
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