Good poem with interesting rhymes. I like how it seems rough until the end, and everything seems so hopeful. Good guidance of the readers' emotions.

--Erty Seidel

It does flow well. I really liked it! The message was again down to earth and relateable to pretty much everyone.

Very good! I can relate to this. Though, no one's there to lend a hand. If you took out the Though, this line would flow perfectly. Other than that line the entire poem flowed. I liked it. Great job!