You are an exceptional writer, that was very very beautiful. You have such a great writing style.

I just recently posted 2 stories and I would love honest feedback or suggestions from a writer like you!

very graphic, but it wouldn't have been if it wasn't

This poem is so raw. but i love it. i actually know people, friends, who take their time beneath october stairs, so to speak.

wonderfully written. Very good use of imagery and a melodic tone of voice.

This is so graphic but beautiful because the emotions feel so raw and real. Your poetry is always so exquisitely detailed and leaves me waiting for something more. Take care.

I didn't like the first line "there has to be love somewhere" because the poem seemed more about lust rather than love or any physical expression of love. *shrug* idk I guess I just associate the word "fuck" with lust more than love.

aside from that, this is a great poem.

Great piece, well written.

Faith