|Reviews for Beneath October Stairs|
| tonight we bloom 3/18/09 . chapter 1
You are an exceptional writer, that was very very beautiful. You have such a great writing style.
I just recently posted 2 stories and I would love honest feedback or suggestions from a writer like you!
| Wylloa 11/13/08 . chapter 1
very graphic, but it wouldn't have been if it wasn't
This poem is so raw. but i love it. i actually know people, friends, who take their time beneath october stairs, so to speak.
wonderfully written. Very good use of imagery and a melodic tone of voice.
| she smolders 8/9/08 . chapter 1
This is so graphic but beautiful because the emotions feel so raw and real. Your poetry is always so exquisitely detailed and leaves me waiting for something more. Take care.
| Scarlett Wynter 8/9/08 . chapter 1
I didn't like the first line "there has to be love somewhere" because the poem seemed more about lust rather than love or any physical expression of love. *shrug* idk I guess I just associate the word "fuck" with lust more than love.
aside from that, this is a great poem.
| Faith Adeline 7/30/08 . chapter 1
Great piece, well written.