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Reviews For: The Route
RodeoGirl 2008-08-04 . chapter 1
So true. I can relate to this. Great job! This flowed so nicely and was well-written.
hybrid calling 2008-08-01 . chapter 1
This is a wonderful poem that I can really relate to. I even like the shape of your poem; it fits perfectly with the content. It makes me think of a narrowing, a narrowing of options, until at the end new possibilities open up and it expands again.

By the way, thanks for reviewing my poem.
Needa S 2008-07-31 . chapter 1
A job well done. Thanks for the kind reviews. Keep up the great work.
Imperia 2008-07-31 . chapter 1
i agree with what you have to say in this piece. it's always hard when you have two options and you have to choose which one will be the best for you. this piece was written very well. i like the advice you gave at the end "to follow your heart and never look back"
Landcaster 2008-07-31 . chapter 1
That was a nice poem: simple, direct, and very relevant. Thanks, you are a good writer.
Zoey McCusker 2008-07-31 . chapter 1
This one was very good! And it is so true that we do do that in real life. As soon as a decision faces us, we're stunned and unsure of which way to turn next.
On the following you heart... yeah, well, have you ever considered praying to God instead?
Great job!
W. Griffin 2008-07-31 . chapter 1
The last stanza is fantastic! Great poem! Keep writing!

-W. Griffin
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