Right off the bat, this poem was really rough with feeling in the beginning and with the image you started was very easy to see in my mind’s eye. The flow in the first stanza was a bit rough and there was a feeling of desperation almost, but as you go on to stanza two through three flowed a lot smoother. This poem expressed its nostalgia in the last stanza and it expressed the angst so well. All in all it was pretty good ;)

Selverwulf
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wow. this was incrediable. and all true personal. im glad you were brave enough to share. its beautiful and its intricate. so many lines reach out to me and i can't pin point a thing, so i guess i'll take it all at face value: it blew me away.

hugs and hugs
eve

Very empowering. This blew me away. Good job!