AWESOME!! LOVE IT!! This story pwns! haha... Amber got brought down. DO NOT mess with Twilighters and their books!

TWILIGHT IS MY BIBLE!! IT MELTED IN THE FLORIDIAN SUN (after Fay had left) AND HALF THE PAGES FELL OUT!
I know . . . yeah Amber is a bitch

ok. I'm glad that bitch got dissed. and honestly I could so beat her in a cat fight like that. =P honestly preps never get the better come backs.

interesting.

First off... Tily's name is capitilized and mines not... mine's just waffle. And it makes me sad. :p
Second off... keep doing what you're doing cause it's great!
Third... I was thinking, "Way to go girl! All of us secretly have two signed copys of Twilight!" (You know I do! Dang... Breaking Dawn's not signed!! *cries*)
But then I realised that it's still the first copy... right? We're going back in time and revisiting the situation. She's going to get three chances to fix her actions. Then the faeries gonna make her PAY for that book! PAY! *muahaha!!*
Really? I'm just guessing... Can't wait for Ch.3!

NO EVIL AMBER .. . .
But very intriging . . . hmm i can guess the outcome . . . kinda . . . well no i can't . . . this is what we get for trying to write happy stories!

1st off: You better be writing a add-on. I feel very cheated by Amber and you said her fairy-tale like lives never end well. Does that hint twards more? :D
2nd off: If someone ripped that *darn* book that I waited HOURS AND HOURS in line for you had better believe it that they were either buying me a *perfect* signed copy online from Meyer's website so it said who it was too also. If it was the bible... (what we refer to my 1st copy as) they might never wake up again.

Actually... I kinda think this is my favorite work of yours. And the first line of the prologe was a GREAT addition!

ok I seriously want to kill amber. that is a seriously good series. I mean I'm freaked that the fourth book won't come out sooner. and it reminds me too much of what hitler did burnning all the books. people call me a freak but they never take the books out of my hands. course they know that I could beat them all up for it if they did. but other than that. I really wish I could jump into the story and kill amber. but that's just me.

this was great. keep up the good work and writing.

NO! NOT TWILIGHT! I would kill anyone who did that too me . . he he fairytales do come true Hop (new nickname thought i'd try it out)
But I almost cried!! I GASPED LOUDLY!