So sad :'(. To think I've innocently eaten so much chocolate without truly appreciating its worth is so depressing, I may have to go kill myself to stop that vicious cycle.
Lol jks, it's too nice to die over.

Very philosophical piece about...chocolate. Go figure. speaking of figures, chocolate has another flaw, though I suppose this flaw is actually a flaw of humans. We love it too much and eat too much of it. We take the precious gift of chocolate, and gorge ourselves on it, removing its value and our ability to fit into that size four dress that was way too expensive.

Lol I can totally relate :)

Lol, lol, lol! I loved this! A story that shows an admiration for chocolate? Perfect...I wish I had some chocolate now...

Only thing i didn't get: WTH was this in the Humor section! Lol. Then i might have found it a little earlier!

This fic has so much more meaning to it than meets the eye. I'm looking for my perfect bar of chocolate too!

I always thought that people never paused to appreciate the gift that is choclate enough lol

this is a very interesting yet humorous story. i love your style. great insight. :) kudos!

"..Because I know, as soon as I take that first bite, it's fate sealed"

that is brilliant.

excuse me but I gotta go. I feel a sudden urge for consuming a big bar of milky sticky chocolate!

For whatever reason I did I typed "chocolate bar" in the search thingy. Why, I don't know, but I'm glad I did because your random story made me feel better. Thank you! Now I think I'll save this peanut butter cup for later...

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Honestly, I found this story hilarious because of the serious voice it is written in. You should try writing a parody or something. I loved the idea, but you got one thing wrong, chocolate has another flaw: it has a lot of sugar. If it were perfect it would be health food AND taste awesome. But I still love this piece!

Write on!

Dude...It's just like me! Except my parents only let me have so much chocolate. T.T Great story btw!

LS