I really liked the poem because it reflects how I feel when I look through photos of myself when I was younger. It's really beautiful.

to me this seemed a little drawn out but i did like it my favorite part would have to be the end
"Childhood.
Impossible to forget.
A part of your life.
You could never regret."
i really loved those lines theyare beautiful

Such lovely nostalgia. Children are so care-free and innocent. Good work!

I like the little message at the end a lot...
It made me think of the one quote: "Childhood is not from birth to a certain age, the child is grown, and puts away childish things. Childhood is the kingdom where nobody dies." Particularly that last part. ...I miss being a child quite a bit sometimes... Looking back I must have seemed kind of odd to the people around me, kids and adults alike. I never really had friends or people I played with, and I preferred to wander the playground, and really anywhere else alone, exploring the "unknown". I would sing songs to myself, and make up stories in my head, playing them out as I went. Well I still do that, it just isn't as... automatic I guess. I didn't care though what people thought when they looked at me, didn't care that the teachers and my family probably only saw a very abnormally anti-social little girl with long brown french braids, eternally weird facial expressions plastered on her face, and who of course also talked to 'herself' in public frequently. So you are very right about the not having any cares, any fears part. Really cool poem.

This was very good! I loved the 2nd to last stanza.

Your last stanza. I think it would be better if you reworded it. This is how I would reword it.

Childhood.
You could never regret,
A part of your life,
Impossible to forget.

Just a thought. Other than that, great job! Photos hold so many memories!

it has a lot of potential. maybe subtlety add a little bit of emotion with each photograph. it might elongate the poem, but you could just use the most important/emotional photos.

Very true and very cute! And haven't we all wished for the good ol' days at some point?
I did notice one grammar error, though. You wrote, "Of me creative things out of Play-Doh." Call me crazy, but I think you missed a word in there. :)
Overall, you're doing great!

Beautiful poem. I really like it, its really relatable.

WOW. Okay, I totally enjoyed reading this poem. For one thing it was so cute!! I loved it. Secondly, I think you conclude it nicely. The ending is my favorite and it is so very true. Nicely done and good job! Please keep writing!!