I like it. I'm not usually a fan of free verse, but either I'm in a good mood today or your poem is really good.

I'm thinking both. Good alliteration and consonance.

--Erty Seidel

Good usage of adjectives and imagery! I especially liked the beginning intro. of 'the sands of time' and such. That was very good. I can definitely understand why you would have a difficult time naming this. There is a wide variety of meanings and symblos that you could call it. How about something like "The Dawn of Day" or "Sunshine Haven"? Honestly, you don't have to use these and they could even be really cheesy. But, hey! Just trying to help!
Keep up the awesome work! You're a good poet!

I like the contrast, it's a good poem. It sort of brings to mind a cross between the story Footprints in the Sand and the painting The Persistence of Memory, if that makes any sense. No title comes immediately to my mind that would fit, sorry I couldn't be more help there.

Great poem! How about the title is "Footprints in the Sand"?

Please R&R,
W. Griffin