This is really good!
I hope you put up more chapters soon :)
I'll be waiting for the it!
Oh, and thanks for the review by the way. And the UK Times is just pretty made up :))
Anyway, brilliant story!
I really like this. Its great. I can't wait to see what's coming next!! Keep it up! The feelings she was feeling with the gun in her hand were written beautifully (sp?)
cant wait to read more