Wow, looks interesting. You have some grammar errors...

Check out my fic, kay?

Wow! Interesting as always ^^. But, it seemed you really out of space to explore this chapie into its maximum competency. But, don't worry, it's still great enough. Be sure to continue it, friend! I'll be waiting! ^o^

This is getting exciting. Nice! Like playing a game. Love it so much! ^o^
And about review, don't give up, friend! Just keep writing and keep up the good work! ^o^

You know, this is going to be exciting! Great! I'm curious with the plot. I like Kaylee and Latina at the first glance. And oh! There's Alviss too! ^o^ Seeing the name, remembering me about Alviss from MAR. Nice! Keep writing will you? Can't wait for the next chapie!! ^o^ hehehe

Hahaha!! Jewel and Rudner are hilarious! Love it! ^^ Fresh from the oven! I love how you wrapped the story. Mysterious, but interesting indeed. Nah, one review right?? Update it!! I cannot wait!! ^o^ Keep up the good work, Ren-chan!!