When i first started reading this, i didn't realise it was completely fiction and i got so freaked out...i was trying to figure out ways to reach you instantly...but then i looked at when this was first published and got even more afraid...but then i saw the comment in the end and all of a sudden it felt like this huge scary cloud passed...God...but wow, really effective!

bravo!

it gave me goosebummps, im cryinng also Great job Soo powwerful

I don't want to be too critical so my opinion is that I think It drags a bit too much. The idea is great. Is it made up or are you writing as you?

Anyways, no hard feelings, it just didn't really appeal to me. Keep writing though!

THE WHOLE TIME I WAS THINKING ABOUT DON'T JUMP. *hugs you until you can't breath*cI love Tokio Hotel . I saw them in concert on AUgust 7th in fact. Mwahaha. Hey, I really like this story. :D

This was really good! Now I am so curious- what's with Austin? Update soon!

This is so true, it's almost scary. Great job so far Raia!

Wow this is good. gr i dont like austin if he did this to her *hehe*. lol anyways, i really liked this chapter and i can't wait for an update! keep writing! angela

I really like this. It reminds me of how I write when I "write someone else's diary" (according to my friend). Looking forward to more. ;)

this is really good so far and i can't wait for the next 'entry'. keep writing! angela

This is excellent so far. You (I don't which of the two members you are, as you forgot to give yourself credit) did a great job of capturing the despair and lack of hope Avara has. Update soon!

I'm very interested, but I need to clear one thing. Is this really about 'you' or are you writing a 'fiction' online diary? Either way, i'll be reading it, keep writing! Angela