 HazeleyedHoney 2009-08-04 . chapter 9Good story. I like Iu's character and I hope he ends up Legna, but I'm kinda confused if that's the way their heading now. Or is Legna heading toward a relationship with Mandarin again? Legna's past is what worries me though, I can't wait to hear his side of it. I guess it'll be a while since he seems reluctant to talk about it. Update as soon as you can. |
 Red Dynamite 2009-03-27 . chapter 9wow, reaveling that jason is actually a girl totally threw me off, but in a good way. :)
i like how as the story progresses, you're telling a little bit about each person, instead of dumping it all on us at once. i also like the way you build sexual tension.
good job, i can't wait for more! |