I like the way this story ends and how simple it is.
It's really good. =)
(It's says "Matt" in the 13th paragraph by the way)

Ooh, I liked it. It was very interesting, and not at all like the many other one shots I've read.

I saw 'Matt' once at, "I'd never heard the name Jessica when it came to Matt", but that was it.

This was nice. It seemed a little disjointed in parts but only for a few moments and then it was back to normal. I think you need to improve how you describe Sarah's actions, they didn't always convey a clear picture.

But I like how you used 'Somber' as Max's last name.

Wow...this is great. And is this really based on a true story?