It's s a really well done Chapter one , wow!

well this is definately an interesting story

Wow, im hooked this is great! I cant wait to find out more about the King and his world!

this chapter is really bautiful. I love the imagery an the use of sounds. It's eloquent the way you wrote this chapter. Keep at it!

Nat

Read it, loved it, reviewed it.

I like this story, update soon please? I believe it is rather amusing, will she get to Wonderland in time? =P

freaky can't wait for the next chaps!

man that guys creepy

the suspense is killing me already

Good beginning, draws reader right into the story and makes them as curious as Alondra. Neat name by the way.

This story is pure brilliance.

This story is so good!

Absolutely amazing story, totally my type. I'm rather annoyed I have to wait for a chapter... oh how I wish it were a book! Please continue soon.

Cool fic!please update soon!

amazing.

Oh, this is every kind of wonderful. Hah, but really.

Your writing style/skill is amazing, one could actually feel what the characters feel. :D

Thus, please update.