Dear Author,

First of all thank you very much for reviewing on my story,

it means a lot to me.

Second,

I really enjoyed the thought of the seasons from your

different point of view. The personification created

beautiful imagery as you read the piece. Some of your

comparisons were pretty neat, like when you said

"Even in the slight breeze, wandering merrily across

the open fields, cannot make you stir", and "It is a

sad, sweet, lilting song that brings both joy and

sorrow to your heart as you hear it, for it is a sign that winter approaches." It was a nice picture. It

sounded like it had alot of hidden meaning behind

it, like a poem.

Really cool words I liked:

- Melodious

- Amaranthine

- Wends

Sincerely,

Devouring Daisies