Wow... Well done! There are a lot of lines that stuck out to me "religion and spiritual/that set up their camps and pitch their tents/but not toward heaven, but toward Hell" How sad is it that there are so many people that are content with their life heading towards hell... "Who will go and fight for the Lord/ in that places where wolves soar" The sheep that are herded by wolves... We as Christians need to stand for what we belive we may be God's sheep but that does not mean that we cannot take a stand. There is a song by Demon Hunter that you may like. Its called "The Soidier's Song" it is somewhat simular to what your poem is about in a way. Anywhoo well done!