i cannot keep up, it's so fast-paced!

Amazing word choice and great imagery.
"i realize i fake loving." -great line.
This piece is good, don't doubt your work :)

wow. that was so poignant and beautiful.
i love it.



i would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work, it would really mean a lot.

"i don't want you fossilized
in my bloodstream."

possibly the most beautiful line i have read/connected with in months

you give me chills.
this is gorgeous: "i realize i fake loving."
incredible.

Wonderfully written - heartfelt and moving. You've taken a topic that's been done over and done over again, and given it fresh life.

Very very well written, I loved every word of it

no worries.
this is not crap.

my favorite stanzas are the first and last.
great wording.

yours until the wind changes,
gg

Yeah. I know how that goes. Memories play like a goddamn broken record. Or 8-track or something.

It's not crap.