Wow. Such emotion is packed into such a small piece. It's beautiful. I loved how you didn't drag it on with unnessecary detail. It packs a punch that way. The ending is quite bitter, yet it rings with dwindling hope. Almost like poetry.

It's lovely the way it is. Don't change it in any way!

- AABAT

aww this is sad:( but well written. i liked this line I’d turn it on, but the remote’s somewhere in the mess around my feet, and I’m not entirely sure I want to clean it up yet.