a little short compared to what im used to could use some more emotion though im not sure how your words decribe the emotion but did not make me feel the emotion you were trying to convay maybe another look wouldent hurt

For eighth grade this is definitely mad good. I think I wrote a poem about birds attacking people then, ha. Anyways, enough about me. I liked this poem a lot. It flowed/rhymed nicely and it was a "cute" love poem, not too sad, not too romantic, but perfectly cute. Just a nice light ream. Solid job, and continued this sterling output.

Nice! Very descriptive and true. You know, it's funny. When something like this is described as you have here, it sounds so uncomfortable. But once your in that position, it's the best feeling in the world! :)
It was good, but i think that maybe it could be a little better if you went on with this and described the boy, or maybe looking into his eyes or something like that. Just a thought.
Keep it up!

Aw, that was really cute. I like it. :)

The rhyming flowed really nicely and you really clarify some confusing emotions that I think all of us feel at one time or another in our lives. Keep writing, k.