love it!

there r soe errors in here, and i guess this chp and some other chap where u mentioned jonas by accident answers my last question, anyway, you'v been saying joe instead of jerry... just warning ya

this is probably going to sound rude somehow, and no, that isn't my intention... Jerry, Adam, and Kevin? I wonder if u got those names from the Jonas brothers? (simple asking, I am most definitely not insinuating anything that might somehow upset you, and yes, Im confusing myself)

yay! they jumped! ;D

That was brilliant, an amazing story. I really felt for her about Rob. And she and Kevin made an awesome couple.

One thing though, why did they keep it to themselves? I don't get why they would want to hide the fact that they are together.. but hey :) it all worked out in the end.

I say again, very good! haha.. ;b

Med

This was incredibly adorable. Kevin was a nice guy and Aurora was a lovely girl. I loved the brothers and the easy camaraderie between Jerry Adam and Aurora. Lovely story. I really liked lyrics mentioned in the story,are they yours or some artists? If its already sang and available do you think you can write up a playlist since i'd really love to go find the songs. Anyway cute story.

The summary was quite captivating.

Ah, Rent is one of my favorite musicals. It's so touching.

"Maybe that's why I did the things I did; to try to make the time pass by more quickly-

is honestly a bit confusing, try taking out some of the words.

This reminds me of some movie I had seen, where some guy jumped off a tower and ended up really hurt-oh yeah, it was "A Walk to Remember!"

Yeah. Anyway, I like the concept of the story, but the fact that she is "fearless" really irks me, because no one is fearless. Did she go through a tramatizing even to make her this way?

And I totally know that I misspelled tramatizing, but whatever.

Anyway. I suppose I should keep reading to find out what happens. For the most part of what I have read, your story is well written. (Though I cannot stand her name. When I pronouce it, it sounds like I'm murmuring.)

You've capture my attention, whether for the good or the bad, and I am honestly hooked.

i just got done finishing this story. it was awesome! loved it!

Cute story. I can't believe her brother.

forgot to add this to favorites, so sorry...

Aw! I loved this story and i sat at my computer for about 10 hours straight reading it. Yeah, I don't have much of a life, it's okay :] Just this is so amazing, and incredibly well written. I must be thick skulleed, since i didn't realize it was Jo Bros until halfway thorugh :[ Thanks for writing this amazazing story, and good luck on your new site!

s172./albums/w15/randomlee_2007/?actionview& &t12212234827

Wow.

I'm liking this already.

& many kudos for the Season's of Love quote (:

wow- this may have been the best fic i've ever read- well, at least the one that's kept me the most interested :)

nice story. i enjoyed it :)

This is quite a nice story I really like it and I've read most of it now (I'm gonna go and sleep since it's 1:16 here ). There are some typos and some names you didn't properly replace (I assume that's what you've been doing after I've read your profile ).

I just gotta say: purity rings? Lol. Not quite my thing. But then, that's just my opinion ;)