I think it rocks and knowing you in person I know it comes from the heart. Someday they'll have to accept you once you and Danny tie the knot.

Reading this, I could imagine this being a problem of mine one day. Lol. I don't know why. Anyway, that's so unforunate for you if this is so. That really isn't fair either. I thought this poem was good. At some parts the way you worded it made it a little difficult to read. Like the "what do I have to do" sometimes threw me off. Maybe it's just me but I found it so more towards the end. The other thing I noticed was you have "knew" instead of "new" for family. Other than that I thought it was a good poem. The rhyming was perfect and I enjoyed a new take on a topic such as in-laws. And the title suits the poem well, too. Good job! Keep writing!

it was okay. What bothered me is it missing punctuation, but the rhymes were good. keep up the writing and if you got the time check out some of my poems. :)