Okay... Caitlin... this one is the most amazing yet. PLEASE SEEK TO HAVE YOUR POETRY PUBLISHED! Absolutely amazing!

I really like the idea here. Your imagery is well done, too. But the meter on the last two stanzas didn't seem to fit quite right. I think that if you changed your wording a little so that they matched the first three (rhythmically), then it would flow a lot better.

I was surprised by how much I liked this. Things like Gossamer Threads and dreaming etc are cliche, but this poem works really well. Your rhyme is great (sometimes rhyme doesn't work), and your word choice is rich. Nice poem!