A certain Glitterpire told me to read this story, so I did. And I love it. Especially Ralph. I want to huggle him.



XO

-settles in to read though I should be writing-

I really need to subscribe to you as an author alert instead of just stories cause I missed this whole thing somehow.

I love the way you describe the scenery and the way your main character does everything and enjoys just a simple kind of life.

Another one down! That was a really good -really cute- story. Even if you don't plan on continuing with it (which i hope you eventually do) I enjoyed what was there. An escort who atually enjoys his job..it's a pretty original idea. Once again i am impressed by your writting skills. Your stories are very descriptive, i can see it like a movie. I also really like the character set up here. They're all so unique and well developed, even if were only introduced to them breifly.
I wanted to thank you for replying to my reiews. Right back at you about the bad day gone good thing. I was havig a terrible day before i got the notice. your response makes me feel apreciated and inspired. Very soon (hopfully) i will have my first story up. It requiers a reliable computer though, which is something i don't really have...yet. Anyway, good luck with all your increcible writting and may the ink in your proverbial pen never stop flowing!

Damn, last chapter! :( Wow...it feels like I've been reading for YONKS! Truly, these chapters are EPIC! And I love them so much!! Oh, and I forgot to mention earlier how much I love the title. It's just so smart XD Oh, excellent, some insight into his dark past...kinda. Alright, brother was involved in a coke ring, I'm thinking...pissed off some powerful guys (mob types?)...October was left to pay off the debt in a bad way...or something like that. Ah, poor October. And I've come to the realization that his hair type is exactly like mine (only difference is the colour! And even then, it's pretty close...)...so I know his pain! Clipping it up is just the easiest solution :P Yay! Date! Aw, he's so paranoid... And Mickey is such a SWEETIE! Like, WOW! That's the hardest combination to come by, I think: a sweetie who's sensitive, but not like a complete doormat with no backbone (speaking from personal experience? Yes, yes I am :P). But, goodness, the man does ask a lot of questions. It probably won't take long for him to learn about October's job. Yay! Ralph! I love Ralph ^^ Newfoundlands are so HUGE! Aw, that kiss was cute... O_O Holy crap! If I walked into a lobby and had a gun pointed at me by a guy with a moustache (ew, moustache...), I'd probably scream like a little girl and pass out. So, good on October for holding his own! Hmm...I wonder if his brother really is alive...? That'd be complicated... Oh, yup, there's the freak-out...at least Mickey didn't let him run off...that probably would've been bad. And good thing he's staying at his house for the night! .O_o ..Dawn is my new favourite character. A zombie frog? That eats fish? That...that is just too awesome for words. Truly. But I digress :P (Eh, when DON'T I digress? :D) Hm, so we've got two complete opposites in bed. Well, guess October has to stick around for awhile longer if he wants to get into Mickey's pants ^^ (It seems like a good excuse :D) Hmm...but how will Mickey react when he finds out October's a rent-boy? I'm thinking either his understanding side will take over and he'll just go with it...or his bad track record with relationships side will and he'll completely freak-out. Or maybe a healthy balance of both! But again: poor October. He's gone through so much in just 4 chapters (well, 3 and a prologue :P). And now he has to move! ...he could just move in with Mickey ^^ Heh heh heh... Looking forward to the next chapter! (Oh, and this is officially the longest review I have ever left in four years. An epically long review for an epically long chapter! :D ...I really like the word "epic"...)

guh. so i know this isn't what you're focusing on right now, and i won't throw myself on the ground and wail for updates in respect for that, but, well. i like zebra-mike and october is cute, so, hum, yes. lovely. and exciting, and oh, i see conflicts everywhere, and complications and dude, mickey is just plain awesome.

I love his friends. Holiday is just so adorable in his complete spazziness! I just want to hug him and never let him go. (...I have a weakness for cute characters...) And Lotus. Not only is his hair awesome, but he makes me laugh. Without him, I bet October would never leave his apartment. And that poor car...so abused... The only safe mode of transport I can think of for Holiday is a plastic bubble. I bet he'd be fine in that! If he fell over, he'd just roll! ...then again, he might roll into a body of water...or traffic...okay, there is no safe mode of transportation. Holiday is doomed. Ha, I like Cara, too XD Oh! And Mickey returns! I still love his hair. I just imagine it and smile. Hm...and although I think they probably shouldn't have pushed October into it...it'll probably be good for him! Mickey seems like a good guy! :D Hopefully... Oh! And if the relationship DOES work out and they stay together forever and always and move in together...October would gain a dog! Yay! :D

Normally I'd wait 'til I got to the last chapter to leave a review covering them all...but these are EPICALLY long, so I'm gonna leave one for each chapter! :D I love October. He's such an interesting character! Plus, dark pasts make things just that much more exciting. Aw, and TOmas is such a sweetie...but October probably should spend a bit less time with him so he isn't led on... Oh, and I love Mickey. Mohawked guy with a piercing and a giant dog? Hell yeah! XD That dog tag thing just struck me as sheer genius. Really. Oh, baker's chocolate...we used that in a psychology experiment...my eyes were closed and it was put into my mouth (I didn't know what it was)...nasty surprise, that :P So, October is a brave man, as far as I'm concerned! :D

Jeez, you make all the other fail-at-updating people feel bad... I'm hiding, now.
Your delusional originality rocks. I love it. I should get back to doing work, now.
yay!

A new story! ^_^ I thought the dog tag bit was very orginal :D This is a very good start :)

Oh, a new story? Awesome! And insanely long chapters...yup, definitely looking forward to it! XD