Aw. Poems are always written better in the heat of emotion. You are an awesome poet. I hope you write another that I will soon be able to read. Until then. VelvetyCheerio.

...interesting (for the lack of a better word ;))

for a poem you wrote on the bus, its bloody good :)
i like the meaning behind it, keep up the good work? xx

this is a good poem. i can relate. very much so.