 Sunnyboy02 2009-11-23 . chapter 18Aw. This story made my day. I loved it so much! You are a very good writer and the story flows so easily and there is no tenseness with your writing. The plot is engaging and your characters really do come alive! Thanks so much for sharing your writing with us! This is definitely one of my favorite stories on here.
Blessings |
 OliviannaMarie Jones 2009-11-22 . chapter 18ohhemmgee!
Someone save me! I getting a toothache from such a lovely && sweet ending!
And here I was thinking a big black hole would eruppt from the sky and a bunch of utants would come through and demolish you all.. ..
( cough cough )
I loved your story. I read it twice. ...
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 chng234 2009-11-22 . chapter 18this is such a sweet ending! |
 Floppy125 2009-11-22 . chapter 18aw! it was so sweet! though i didn't like that the ring didn't fit :S
anyways.. the story was awsome!! |
 everyonedeservestheflames 2009-11-22 . chapter 18THAT WAS JUST... BREATH-TAKING!
And so freaking amazing.
I'm going to hate myself for making this reference, but he kinda reminds me of Edward Cullen. Haha, I just saw New Moon.
I love Robert Pattinson.
Anyway, GOOD JOB!
Like, really really good job. It was an amazing story. |
 laugh-till-it-hurts 2009-11-22 . chapter 18I loved thisw chapter. It's not the end is it? |
 JennWin 2009-11-22 . chapter 18Oh my goodness i'm so sad that this story is over... It was so good! just wanted you to know! |
 chng234 2009-11-21 . chapter 17FINALLY they r together... i m hAPpy For tHEm |
 Bangle Meister 2009-11-21 . chapter 17naw! update soon :P |
 ChemicalxDisturbance 2009-11-21 . chapter 17I pooped the smaller pill into my mouth...TYPO! IT MADE ME LAUGH SO HARD! =D lol great chapter! update soon! |
 iluvodie 2009-11-21 . chapter 17i have enjoyed reading the story :D |
 ChemicalxDisturbance 2009-11-19 . chapter 16haha he punched him! =3 |
 Floppy125 2009-11-19 . chapter 16aw! what a nice chapter!
You had a few grammar mistakes (with the tenses) but not more than than ;) it was a great chapter and I love how they're making progress!
please update ASAP |
 iluvodie 2009-11-19 . chapter 16stupid charlie >:[ |
 everyonedeservestheflames 2009-11-19 . chapter 16THAT WAS SO ADORABLE/AMAZING. I CAN'T STOP SMILING! |