aww

this is just too cute

Cute :)

LOl can I have your permission to say the same thing every time? hehe Swet

xD

Yet another great one!

i loved the oneshot even though it was short. kep up the good work.

peace love happiness

SWEET! I love this! It's a perfect thing. Just a snatch of a romantic scene, but it is beautiful. I am a hopeless romantic. Well-written fic.

That was so cute! I loved it...:)

aw!
that is so cute!

Yeah, I loved it, even though it was short. I'm so original, using my own words [sarcasm/]

-grins- That was really funny! And cute! I just realized that this one shot didn't have any names for the characters... wow...

I enjoyed it a lot! Good job!

Hey girl! Guess who?? No really, guess. Lol oh my gosh your story is so cute! I love it! I haven't read any of your stories in ages, but I haven't really had any spare time what with all this Year 11 work. I mean, last year was so not like this! I just finished my ICT coursework aswell lol. Anywhoozles, I'm getting sorta side-tracked... I love one-shots, specially romantic ones. Great story :).. (adds you to favourites then looks for more of your stuffs to read) Chica :P Xx

I really like this little story...It was simplistic and just...refreshing I guess. Like I mean it wasn't really really deep but somethings in life just aren't and thats what writing is all about; being realistic. Good job, very cute.

Aww! That was so sweet! I'm not sure, but maybe you shouldn't put the whole ending in the summery. I know you don't have all the details in it, but the reader knows your gonna have her kiss him back in the end anyways, so...maybe you should just say the part where he kisses her in the summery, and maybe a hint that she might kiss him back? I don't know xP
But yeah, this was really sweet! (: And I liked how you didn't give their names. I'm not sure why. I just liked it xP

-Katie