Hello, girly, I was just wondering when were you going to do an update on Jane and Victoria. I don't mean to rush, but this is an awesome story that I believe is worth continuing. I'm interested to find out all the juicy tidbits.

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Interesting. I don't think this chapter gave us more time to get to know Mr. Sam. Hopefully the further along the story gets, the better we get to know Mr. Sam.

I like the fact that you had both characters mature, but I don't trust Vicki, she just suddenly developed "love" for her sister. That's a trip. I get the idea, that she's planning something. If she is sincere about her apologies to Jane, then I am ecstatic. I like this story. It's good, different than what I've been reading.

It's chilling, to think that Jane's own sister wouldn't return her hug, a genuine one. Jane just wants acceptance and Victoria's so bitter, that she can't seem to see that the only one she really has, is Jane. I feel sad for both girls.

Wow, this is really good. I like it.
There is one qualm I have. That is the use of fowl language when the foster mother cursed at Jane. In the thirties and forties, fowl language was frowned upon by many, and a woman of standing, did not use it. Because of the way, they obviously live, in posh surroundings, and are not street characters, I would suggest that you use bigger words to describe her anger toward her daughter. Women of standing considered it improper and vulgar to use offense language such as "**"