This one is good.I can 's simple, but it says all it needs job.

Wow...

"I haven't died yet." The simplicity of those words makes the entire piece that much more intense, emotional, and haunting. Great work!

Very good. A poem about cutting or wait... attempting suicide that isn't clichéd. You are obviously superior to me when it comes to rhyming skills. Um... I'm bad at reviews... sorry. It's short and sweet, and it tells a nice sad little story. That's cool.

This short, sweet & amazing!

Good job.

It's never that easy...Not when we expect it to most.

When I read this, I could feel my stomach swirling with the emotion of being upset. I can't relate to the cutting reference, but I can relate to the feeling of confusion, pain, hopelessness, and the wanting to die.

It was breathtakingly conveyed. Spectacular job.