I like it. Leans to the macabre a lot but in a less serious way. Sort of. All the same, I like it, nicely done.

Wow kind of morbid I like it. As always I look foreward to what comes next.

Interesting. This is unlike the other soul reaper stories I've read so far. I caught a couple of mistakes, but it's quite good. I liked how you used plenty of description, and Alex is probably my favorite character so far.