*There again, it is still September - I think you meant "Then again".

Very well written chapter. I love your descriptions, dialogue, and humorous dialogue that helps relate readers to a comic relief in their own family.

Can't wait to get into reading the next chapter, UPDATE!

This is by far, the shortest prelude/preface I've ever read. haha dunno even why im reviewing. but, very nice choice of words at the very end, that suckers anybody who reads it straight in. It's like a voice talking in a black screen of a movie, then those ending words and the movie begins.

The prefece is really, really short. While I understand the need to seperate that from the first chapter, I dunno if leaving it on by itself is good compared to combining it into the first chapter. The story did pique my interest, so granted, I'll read more of this.

This is a very good story. I like Stephanie, she's the kind of character I always seem to pay the most attention to.

I can't wait to see more! :]