"Not what you expect it to be"? What do people usually expect from crisp fiction, I wonder? It made me laugh.

Needs some proofreading.

Proper capitalization of title: "A Chip Named Henry"

Why capitalize Sour?

who taught 8th careers (witch dipping sauce is best): What does "8th careers" mean? A witch is on a broom; which is a question; how is a chip dip a career choice?

and all the way to the top: should be: "and climbed all the way to the top"


Luck.

Lol. Funny story! I hadn't seen any new stories from you in a while, I figured you had retired. I'm glad that you didn't!

YAY! FINALLY! An update!

OMG...THAT MADE ME ROFL! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...

GOOD JOB...I LIKE THE TEACHER, MR. HILL PLAYING WITH BLOCKS. ;)

KEEP UPDATING, AND ILL KEEP READING!

HAHAHAHAHAHAAH...THAT WAS GOOD SARA! GIGGLE...

BYE!

Midnight-Wolfe