Hey Moon, this is Blade!
I really enjoyed your story! It was fun to read and I felt like I was reading a piece by someone much older! I'll have to send you some of my work!...I have none on my profile right now ^.^

i love the mysterious, magical essence of this story so far. i hope there will be more, because i really enjoy your style of writing. it's almost lulling, but i also feel that you'll do good with the characters, because they seem to have a bit of depth to them alright, i can feel the girl's pain in the beginning, and Arknine's scene was warm, i felt that. you do a very good job of conveying different aspects to the reader. and you're style is very fluent and--again--lovely mysterious!! do update soon :)
happy writing!

~Samantha Marie

I like your Prologue. It was well written and the first chapter was well written