update again soon thanks

UHM... WHAT STORY ALL I SEE LOL IS A SUMMARY OF THE STORY

more! i love this story but i keep forgetting whats going on during the wait time in between chapters!1 post more soon

yay! post again soon

will he shake her hand?

Hey, I'm interested in your story, but I wanted to point out to you that some of your sentences have quite a few missing words and I wouldn't point this out considering we all make that mistake, but it's pretty consistent in every chapter. I get thrown off when I place in some words and I lose the vibe of the story. Plus, I feel weird putting in the words myself considering it's your story, even if they are simple words. I prefer reading the author's words.

Might I suggest you re-read your works before you post them up or have someone else re-read them, it really helps when you have an extra set of eyes and brain.

Other than that, you have a pretty good story line.

thanks for updating

This is a beautiful and heartwarming story. It makes me want to cry (and that's a good thing 'cuz I love stories like these.) Although there are some grammar problems and the names are kind of confusing (and sometimes get mixed up). Overall, this is a wonderful story and you should definitely continue it. ;]

i really am liking this, keep up with the updates :]

please continue wrting! i love the story!

please keep writing!

thanks! love it!

Thank you for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter!

will he remember everything once he sees her?