Haha...seems to be a reoccuring theme in life women are unfortunately being plagued with.

haha! i totally didn't see the end coming. :)
great job!

lol :)

haha i love that last line
too funny!

Oh wow XD That's one of the funniest things I've ever read on fiction press! I think I might have just died laughing.

HA! Wow, that sucks that he's gay. I think this is hilarious!

I like the flow and rhythm, and it was quite funny, I have to say. It's weird in a good way.

Oh! I love this! HILARIOUS!

"Too bad he's gay."

Really slaps you in the face! (metaphorically speaking of course)

Lmao. I think all guys like that are gay. It's just too good to be true hehe. If it's not too much, would you read my story and give me some feedbacks? Anyways that was a good laugh at the end :DD

xo,
monkey :DD

It is a truth universally acknowledged that all unbelievably gifted men usually are T_T the poem is hilarious. great job!

OH MY GOD, this crazily funny. you really had me laughing. LOL, Good job.

Izz the truth. Darn shame too. lol

that was absolutley amazing.but of course its always true

SO true, ha ha ;D

hahaha thats so funny and I bet that would actually happen to me. Haha can you read and review my story the not so glamorous life of milicent walker? I need some input and hits and your story thing is funny so i'd love some input from you! Thanks