OH. Wow. I was confused at first about where this was headed, but now - that's really cool! I've never heard someone do Little Red Riding Hood in complete reverse like that, haha. That was very clever. How original.

I also like how you use the word "you", where you make me the main character - it drives home some of the horror that is in the story, especially at the part where the floorboard creaks. :) Nice job!!

-Jesse
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