wow, that was good. i dont know if i would have been brave enought to challange that dude like she did. i noticed a few mistakes, but i want to read more!
Good job!
Glory!

Terrifying experience, I'm sure. Update soon. :)

Interesting. Update soon. :)

After already reading the first chapter i was already prepared for a brilliant 2nd chapter, which it was! Really well done and i love the describtion about the terrifying noises. I wonder what happens to Jace and Bella next...? and where's Haley...? and who are the soldiers...? Oh well, really really good :)

OHMYWORD! Yes, that is all I can say. Update!
(You know I wouldnt be able to tell even if you had made some grammatical mistakes, so if there were, someone else can rant about them.)
Luv ya!
Glory =]

Whoa ok tanks? Lol. Like you said short and sweet. Nice :D

After only the first few sentences i was already hooked like a fish, so very well done. I would love to see a follow up :)

Now zoe... comon do you really need to be writing about terror?? that is not a nice subject! i like tacos better o wait no chinese is better m i love chinese and tacos! what were we talkin about? oh ya your story could use some more to it!! it is to short! not enough words or lengthiness! needs to be lenghty!

Keeps you on edge.Awesome. Hope to see more.

ohmyword! Is she gonna die?! WHat is with the eye? i need to know! lol
luv,
Glory