Ahh, his father bit him..and his mother :s Holy shit! Still this id so good. I just like the feeling you have, even though it's a short as it is, it's really good. You don't even need to hear if I want more because ofc I do! =)

Really liked the scene and how you wrote it. Don't think you should make it longer than a one-shot. Love to read more someday! =D