You've captured the essence of the doubts of a young believer so well. I for one, definitely identify with it. Excellent job :)

I like this. the fist stanza is my favorite... just something about the way it reads. I like how you relate trust and belief with love. it's so good and so true. and even though it's a religious poem, I feel like it can be applied to relationships (not necessarily romantic ones, but do you know what I mean?) in general.

"I could tell Him to prove it
but the truth is, He already has"

lovely.

I didn't think the ending was weak. Either way, I like it just as it is.

Wow. It's kinda scary how much I can relate to this right now. Good work, keep it up :)

I enjoyed this. I think I might show it to my sister, actually. Beautifully done!