Very impressive story. I enjoyed it.

the first chapter left me with alot of questions. but the second one answered most of them
they were both so beautifully written!
personally, I like the second version better. It seems more focused. but both are amazing.
thank you for writing!

Interesting.

Can I have a go at guessing something (um...because I want to? Lol)? Is it called "Daddy's Little Girl" in relation to what happens at the end? The face that she recognises and was once fearful of, that was her dad, and her husband does the same thing he did to her...?

Anyway, interesting story. It had me wondering what was gonna happen. :)

Reading through some of the most recent reviews of this story, i must say i am shocked at how unbelievably stupid some people are. I mean, really.

Daddy's Little Girl was well done : )

Wow. Just wow.

Yeah I would like to see more! :)

i... don't get it

hey im confuse of the story .i couldnt understand it...

Very interesting Sometimes it's a little unclear about what exactly is going on, but it fits with the foggy atmosphere that carries throughout the story. I like that's it's sort of set like a horror movie, where it flashes between past and present and it feels fuzzy. I really enjoyed it.

what the hell?
that was a seriously disturbing story
i thought you were a good author based on you "trouble starts with a q" story...but apparently, i thought wrong.

Ooh.
I like this.
It reminds me of something my sister wrote.
You should check out her; her penname is Rominee (:

x

so, she was molested, she is still, I just feel that this story hasn´t got an ending to it. since her father had her, and her husband is getting turned on 'being' her father, she is just living her life in a cirkle, what comes around goes around. just let her kill herself. she needs to let go.

this story is strange. her husband gets turned on by behaving like her father and has sex with her? she needs help.

Wow. So, I have read two disturbingly dark stories in the course of two days. Both wonderfully written and written by you. This being the latter one.
I can definitely see the ... very subtle similarity between this and Eidolon. The mood of both are just so hauntingly and permatingly dark. They are both vastly thrilling to read. I'm not sure what that says about my personality, but this was wonderful to read.
I actually found this more disturbing than Eidolon. I think it's because I don't have a brother, so the former plot didn't loom over my head as much. Also, Leah's scars are much less apparent. I adjusted to Cassie's portrayal, while Leah's confusion was made apparent only at the end.
Both version were extremely well-written. I like both for different reasons. The former was more mysterious and open for interpretation, for one. This did make it very difficult to understand. But I prefered the anonymity of the characters in the latter. The second version gave away too much, in a way, though. It was almost a near balance, though, and I applaud you for it.
I really did enjoy reading this. I think dark, scarring stories may be my new obsession.

I don't get it...