Stupid plagiarizers! I'm sorry about that, and I'm even more sorry that I'm not able to read your entire story - this one and FIre and Frost. From what I could see, they looked as if they would be fantastic.

I would have absolutely loved to have read your story! But I understand the risk you'd go through to post it like this. Thanks for giving us a chance to read it.

Noo, this story is interesting! I must finish reading it. I'm so late though...

Very impressive story. I enjoyed it.

the first chapter left me with alot of questions. but the second one answered most of them

they were both so beautifully written!

personally, I like the second version better. It seems more focused. but both are amazing.

thank you for writing!

Interesting.

Can I have a go at guessing something (um...because I want to? Lol)? Is it called "Daddy's Little Girl" in relation to what happens at the end? The face that she recognises and was once fearful of, that was her dad, and her husband does the same thing he did to her...?

Anyway, interesting story. It had me wondering what was gonna happen. :)

Reading through some of the most recent reviews of this story, i must say i am shocked at how unbelievably stupid some people are. I mean, really.

Daddy's Little Girl was well done : )

Wow. Just wow.

Yeah I would like to see more! :)

i... don't get it

hey im confuse of the story .i couldnt understand it...

Very interesting Sometimes it's a little unclear about what exactly is going on, but it fits with the foggy atmosphere that carries throughout the story. I like that's it's sort of set like a horror movie, where it flashes between past and present and it feels fuzzy. I really enjoyed it.

what the hell?

that was a seriously disturbing story

i thought you were a good author based on you "trouble starts with a q" story...but apparently, i thought wrong.

Ooh.

I like this.

It reminds me of something my sister wrote.

You should check out her; her penname is Rominee (:

x

so, she was molested, she is still, I just feel that this story hasnt got an ending to it. since her father had her, and her husband is getting turned on 'being' her father, she is just living her life in a cirkle, what comes around goes around. just let her kill herself. she needs to let go.