wow i really like the start of this story. Well to be honest I really like most of your stories your a really good writer keep it up :D

Great beginning. I can't wait to read what happens next so I hope you plan on updating and soon.

i think this is an amazing piece, your best really. the dialogue is very sharp and on point and, to boot, you've created a far more dynamic character than in any of your previous works. quirky sort of girl that every girl can relate to, which is a great thing on your part

Please update again soon! I like this story so far and i want to read more!

Now that is my dream proposal. Yeah, including the beginning too! How romantic, I mean he just bursts it out of nowhere! *sigh* UPDATE

lol. this is a very dramatic start to an interesting relationship...

cute story (=

cool~ she's a little weird but w/e

AH! I adore this story already! Nice work...when are you going to update the next chapter?

That's a great start to your story. Love how you introduced the characters.

Keep writing.

-Evil Kittens Unite

so... does she know he's a billionaire or will she find out at his families house?

I like this so far, and I'll definitely continue reading when you update. A couple mistakes, at one point you wrote "formidably" instead of "formidable," and you misspelled one word that I can think of off the top of my head: "reapholstered" should be "reupholstered."
Now if you'll excuse me, my neurotic father is worried that his socks look gay.

- Murphy

hey, can't wait for more, this is great ~ Alenor

Hey! Cool story! I wonder if there's any twists in this story. I do think so.

Update soon.

Yay new story! Haha.
Wow, proposing before going to work. Haha.