cute, fluffy story :) keep up the hard work!

I can't believe I didn't read this before! :o

aw. that was cutee. :3

AW giggle.
how adorable. i give you major props for this one. ;)

awwz sweet

Very, very cute!

AWW! :3 Clinton wins the stealing contest. Hahaha.
love love LOVE this story. Can't wait for more of your writing. (your style is just SO FUN

you realy can make different...ish story
i don't know why but everyone is useing that you stole my heart thing well everone meaning (you and pinkamoo and poosobly others)
P.S i am unhappy to say that your story is good :(

ahahahahah!

Me: 3
Him: One Million
:L

LMFAO

I like this and although sometimes oneshots should be exactly that... one shots, this story wasn't one of them. The bones of this piece would make a really good novel and the two quick witted main characters would be fantastic to get to know even better.

Really, you did your awesome characters here a disservice by leaving this so... simple!

The only person I didn't like was Casey, but she was necessary ;)

Great idea, I just wish it was longer :)

Katie

i got a laugh over this, so you're not that crazy...or you're just plain funny :) i like your vocabulary: sleep-arounder...so much better sounding than any of those other words hmm i should start using it :D thanks for the idea!

KYA~!
so cute!
co awesome!
loving it!

Haha! That was a great story! I love how it went back and forth with them stealing each others things, and then he didn't even know that she'd "stolen" the umbrella. That was great! It definitely made me giggle quite a big.

One big thing that did kind of stand out to me was... well, you're not American, are you? I mean, it doesn't really matter, but this took place in New York, and there were quite a few things I picked up that wouldn't be typically found in American English (e.g., till, mum, "smart looking"). No biggie, of course because I loved reading this anyway! But that WOULD be something I would pick up, with my crazy love for accents and dialects and such.

Now... where can I find a cute lawyer? Any recommendations?

Those three words were key words to use in New York City, New Yoek(York).
“Photographic memory comes in handy at times,” I replied shruggina
(shrugging)
i love your stories so much! Im a sucker for a happy ending!
XxCrossMyHeartxX

well, that was nice, in a wierd sort of way. Should have been longer though.