I just noticed how long it's been since you reviewed ... darn. Hope you're still working on this because I was hooked from the third sentence of the prologue.

Allanasha Ke Kiri

WOw, I really like this. M-preg, isn't really my thing, but I really like this this story..even though no ones pregnant yet. I really hope you contineue the story..cause Jibriel and the Wizard are just to cute not to, lol. Anyway really great story!

Please please pelase PLEASE update now! I love this story so much!! Please don't leave me!!

Beo is not so bad but he never did actually apoligize. Jibra is a little fireball like his answer to Beo.

That was funny Jibri unkowingly torturing Leonhart just by eating and his comment about the alpha being a lion lol.

Jibri fits all the requirements, too bad leonhart isn't so far interested.

Awesome how the king's anger shook the palace.

Like Jibri cute and shy. A royal master lol. nice chap

I like Myrddin(his mischievouness) and Leonhart.

teehee
I'm bangali too.
its prety kickas
and werd about the large population.
it's so polluted in my home city.

Are you bangali?
:)

update

OMG, best story ever! I cannot WAIT to read the rest! I love m-preg, the baby bump is so adorable! And i totally want to see some sexy dancing jibri, lol. Is he gonna help teach Leon? Except he probably would ahve to learn native dances too. They could learn together. And the cinderella thing! A ball... cool. ^.^. And doe jibri have cool powers, since he's a shaman? cus that would be cool! and was myrridin's male lover king arthur? Cus that would be really awesome, as i'm currently watching the british show Merlin. And will anyone ever explain Myrridins powers to jibri? and if jibri has any cool powers, that would be a great chance for them to be revealed! Anyway, Leon and Jibri are adorable, i love Myrridin,(cute!), and everything. except Beowolf. Meany.

That was so cute. I t so reminds me of something else that I will tell you about later, but it was a great way to have all of them meet and interact with each other.

I could feel the unease in the Alpha and the wizard's picking kept me laughing. This is so good, I really did not look for any misstakes. I know that some people review and stuff just jumps out but IMO this is excellent and I just love it to pieces.

You are so good with your pace and the tone is so nice. I also like the eerie dream in the beginning and the foreshadowing so way to go with the suspense factor really!!

Great story!!

Momo author of My Queen - Pay it forward the roadhouse

I say loads of drama which is what I like!! Now I hope you are not going to tell us this guy can have kids are you? Just PM me the answer and I'll go from there. This is such a cute story and I am loving the reactions of Leon and Myrddin and Jibri. I don't know if I've said it or not but I like the names you have in your story and well I just can't wait to read more.

I think it is going at a good pace because when I got to the AN I was like ' AW man'. So great job of telling us more about Jibri too. It is not a forced way to bring in more information and the dialogue was really realistic!

Kuddos to you great author and I know you have even more drama in store. Poor matchmaking wizard.

Momo author of My Queen - Pay it Forward