This is very well-written; I actually cried reading the last two chapters! I'm hooked now and can't wait for an update. Well done :)

i really like this :)

but you made me cry, and that is really hard to do when i'm reading. but then again, Run always makes me sad for some reason xD

i really hope you update this :)

Pleasepleasepleaseplease keep writing about bellydance

OMG YOU CANNOT LEAVE A STORY LIKE THIS! IT MADE ME CRY. Please, continue it! Please, it's so well written, and was so original, don't stop writing it!

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so sad. but an excellent story

I really like your character :) so far we relate- except i am definitely not excellednt at belly dancing yet :)

K, this story CAN NOT! be over. I won't let it. It's too sad. You left it at the climax. Come on dude, please write some more. I mean, she has to honor Alexander (Andre's) promise. She has to fall in love. Come on, say it with me. matt, Matt, MAtt, MATt, MATT, MATT! Please, it's just too sad. The conclusion I draw from the story right now is that she's going to kill herself. NO! I am not giving you ideas. That would be bad. Bad person. Prove me wrong, write a happy ending. Not all stories end happy, but you must finish this one. And it has to be happy. Please, for all your happy fans out there. P.S. Your story is really emotional and funny, it has a little twist and... I just thought of something. You don't have to use it, but it would be sweet. But I'm not telling you how to write your book, keep doing it your way, it's good that way. Anyway, maybe Alexander can leave Andrea his car. That would be funny, but also sweet. Keep up the good work.

This is so sad! It made me cry. :)

OH MY GOD!

I have not been able to stop crying for the last two chapters!

thats soo sad :(

update soon

All i can really say is "woah." I nearly cried reading the song and before when Andre died.

NDF

I've read your story and its beautiful, this chapter especially. it's so sad yet beautiful. I read it at school so i had to stop myself from crying but i really felt it! please update soon, i need to know what happens next! I can't believe that Andre's dead!

oh i SO had a feeling that was gonna happen :O

update soon!

You take a long time explaining thigs, and it's almost gets boring waiting for the good parts to start. The plot is also going at a slow pace. It;s good to know things about the character, but sont; soend too much time talking about it. The more you talk, the less the reader is interested.

These are just my opinions, though.

Lol; Lopy. That's interesting. P

And I LOVE the sarcasm! :D