 alwaysthereforyou 2008-08-19 . chapter 1i like it. sometimes poetry is for ranting and is a great way to realease and show others powerful emotions. well done keep it up.
~peace |
 daughterofmusic 2008-08-18 . chapter 1LOVED it. Just how I feel when I get angry at someone, especially if it's someone I know I shouldn't be mad at.
Keep writing! :)
Always here to review...
~Music |
 Bonnie 2008-08-07 . chapter 1 I really like how all the lines are clipped short and sharp. I can almost feel you clenching your teeth and glaring. So good poem, although I am sorry that you are so angry. |
 Forgotten Legend 2008-08-07 . chapter 1yep i like it
its simple and the message is clear |