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Reviews For: Circus Freaks
telepop 2008-08-31 . chapter 1
Ouch! No reviews, well I’m certainly proud to be the first then: P. In due time someone will notice you; your stories are pretty freakin’ creative. It seems like a one shot to me, a uber short one. Anyways, I’m sorry to say but this is a super huge cliché. (Ha, a rhyme) And a remake of “Cat Woman” and we all know, at least I do how much that movie sucked balls. But the circus is fun and yeah I’m going to end it there, I don’t know what else you might add. I’d be pretty stuck if I were in your shoes. But then again I have crap imagination. That’s why I’m the reader not the writey. I think its kina boring for the first chapter. But yeah...Its super short you can expand it to anything you’d possibly think up. I’m not really interested in this idea. But I’ll totally read if you get some crazy exciting, non boring twists and a major awesome plot. With the whole genetics and cat stuff, circus overrated junk over with, I don’t what else there’s to add, somebody to kill the superhero cat babe? Love your stories though! My bag tirade is over with. I know you can possibly think up a better story though, totally. Oh and uh sorry I’m like a month late for this, I’ve been avoiding it for some reason. Oh but I love your stories. :P
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