i'm really upset that this is a one-shot. You should really carry on with it, everyones gonna love it like they do with Cloak and dagger (you need to update that btw) please carry on

Interesting,

thanks for bringing it to fictionpress :B

YAY I'm your 100th reviewer!(:
LOL.
Cute story - I like it(:

hahhaha i loled so hard at her sexual innuendo. The only thing that bothered me is that she's a freshman. omgg 14 sounds too young. hahah maybe im just like a prude, but whatever i enjoyed this =)

plz more chapters

This can't be a one-shot!! I want to know what happens next. Please continue it!! It sounds like it could be a really great story!

plz plz plz continue this? its amazing. i love the plot line. i want to see what happens next

funny and cute, simple as that :)

Estoy deacuerdo con los demás, una versión más larga estaría super.

Ah, I love this. (: I wish you wrote it as an actual novel, but I guess that would take the fun away from it.

I agree!
A longer version of this would be pretty interesting, I think.
Oh, well. Good job, anyway!

way good :)

moree would be nice though (hint hint:P)

Would it be at all possible for an extension of this? It's far too entertaining to stay a one-shot.

I like.

And you know if you're worried about the plagerism thing still, you could always try , you can't copy and paste on that site. And I hear that the top 5 authors for some amount of time get picked by the company that hosts the site to become an authentic book.

Your choice, of course.

' “I'm fourteen!” I said, eyes widening. “Let me out! Let me out of the car!” '

That was hilarious! Nice work :P